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Back to the Past part 3: Backing to the Past

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Scarlet spends hours in her room, she still thinking about what just happened ,  finally decides to go out of her room, she walks in silence to her parents room to see if they are sleeping , she escape from her house and go to the store of weird stuff (the store of the raccoon guy , you know who I mean if you see the show) . Scarlet and enter in the store while she’s looking around , all the stuff and things, finally , she meets  a raccoon girl similar to the raccoon guy……she’s her daughter.

Can I help you?.-ask the raccoon girl

Yes….i’m…..looking for something that can change my life, or any magic stuff , or something that could help me…, do you have something??.-ask scarlet with a little smile

DAD!!.-shouts the raccoon girl
His father appears, he looks older than before.

What’s up?.-ask the raccoon

She’s asking for any magic thing, stuff that could change her life or something like that, do we have any like these?.-ask the raccoon girl

mmm….*thinking*-the raccoon guy goes to a secret room and brings with him an old box and looks for the magic stuff. Finally he found something, a magic silver coin.

What is that??.-ask scarlet

This may looks like a simple  coin , but does what you want.

Could change my life??.-ask scarlet

Yes and more…so be careful with what you want …cause..-said the raccoon guy

Ok, I’ll take it!.-said scarlet taking the coin

What ? , but …said the raccoon

How much?.-ask scarlet looking in her pockets

10 dollars.-said the raccoon

Ten dollars?!!  , for a simple coin?!!.-said scarlet

It’s not just a simple coin girl!! , this coin…!!-said the raccoon

Ok,  here’s !!.-said scarlet giving the money and taking the coin

Thanks!!.-said scarlet leaving the store

Girl, wait!!.-said the raccoon

Dad, it’s just a coin..what could happen?.-said the raccoon girl

It’s not just a girl darling, that coin could change more than just her life…more…said the raccoon with serious voice .

*view of scarlet backing to her house, she enters in silence again and go to her room closing the door*

Finally….ok…I need to be careful, and think what I wish…, but what did that raccoon means... ah, well it’s time to say my wish…*scarlet close her eyes and takes the coin with both hands and say her wish, but for a weird reason, a storm appears with a big rain*.
I…..WISH….SCAREDY NEVER WERE MY FATHER!!..-said scarlet holding the coin

In that moment a her windows open and the rains enters in her room, scarlet try to close the windows but the storm was stronger than her and hits her agains the walls and she faints.

Finally scarlet open her eyes and see its morning, she looks around and see there’s something different, her room was different, she go outside and see the house looks so different,  and she finally see a photo….in the photo scaredy married sally instead.

Scarlet couldn’t believe it,  she heard someone coming , she finally see sally, she looks older and different.
She was so happy and singing, finally scaredy arrives with his uniform and so tired with a serious face.

Sally runs to him and hugs him.

Hi my sweety and lovely husband!!!.-said sally really happy

I can’t breathe!!!!.-said scaredy being strangled by sally
Oh my god!! , I’m so sorry sweety ! , who was your day?.-ask sally happy

Oh….great, all is great.-said scaredy with a little smile

Oh, oh!! , I know what will cheer you up!!.-said sally happy

We won’t try to do it again , right?, my back still hurts .-ask scaredy a little nervous and tired

Ahh…no, just come to the kitchen sweety…said sally carrying scaredy on her arms and putting him on the chair
Guess what you gonna eat?!!.-said sally excited

No more sea food…no more sea food…said scaredy with low voice.

Algae!!.-said sally

NO!!!!...I mean…oh, great jejje.-said scaredy with a little smile

You need to take care of yourself sweety, that’s why we just eat sea food, it’s delicious and good for ours bodies, it’s like eat the sea bottom ajjaj!!.-said sally happy

Yeah….jeje.-said scaredy a little sad and eating

Scarlet saw everything and left the house, she was happy cause thinks everything its better cause scaredy it’s no longer her father , but she ask herlself: “how  scaredy could marry sally ? , scarlet remember he dad told her they just was friends , scarlet doesn’t give importance to that and looks for her mother.

Scarlet finally found her, she’s an actress and gives classes.

*knock, knock*
Sue opens the door

Mom! , -said scarlet

What?!-said sue surprised

Mom, it’s me! , Scarlet!.-said scarlet

Oh, I guess you are looking for another person.- replies sue

What?! , but…wait…but you are my mother!.-said scarlet

What?! , that’s impossible cause I never had  kids-said sue

WHAT?!! .-shouts scarlet

Who ‘s  it darling ?.- said paddy walking to the door

What?!! , what’s he doing here?!!.-said scarlet

Oh, he’s Paddy Patterson , my HUSBAND…-said

WHAT!!! , you..you, Married….PADDY PATTERSON??!!.-said scarlet In shock

Yeah, we have 10 years married and we’ll be 11 the next week.-said sue

Wait…!, but, who?!, that was not supposed to happen!!.-screams scarlet and faints.

*scarlet opens her eyes while she listens a known voice *

Are you okay?.-ask sue looking scarlet, both was sitting on the coach inside her house.

I’ m back!! , oh..i still here…, oh damn it!!!.-said scarlet disappointed to that wasn’t a dream and she lies on the coach.

What do you mean?.-ask sue

*scarlet thinks for a while what just happen and then asks again*

*take a breathe*…well, it’s just all this time I thought you and scaredy was married but now I see you married paddy, by curiosity , why did you marry him?...-ask scarlet

Well…all that happen 10 years ago…, balsa city had his first dance at the gym , after me and scaredy split after the play , we met again sometime ago , we started again and tried to be friends ,  but the time passed and I remember I started to feel what I felt for him when we first met , but I wasn’t sure if he felt the same , and specially with sally above me and making sure I won’t try to “do something” to make scaredy wants to be more than my friend. Well , was the big night and I was ready to tell him who I felt , but I had been talking to dave who I felt,  and he said knowing scaredy he felt something for me too as when we first met,  but paddy Patterson arrives and had the big idea to take revenge cause he lost the tournament of paddle ball cause scaredy won, well , he wanted to give him the worst blow , and you know the worst blow is the blow to the heart.  Paddy knew it about me and scaredy , and he tried to make him feel jealous , and he took me away from him and acted like a jerk .

Scaredy noticed that and I knew he was jealous , and even he tried to stop him but paddy called his friends and they fought outside the gym , dave and him tried to overcome them, but they wasn’t strong enough to win and they gave them a big beating and scaredy was really hurt , I just couldn’t stand at that anymore but scaredy just gave up and paddy didn’t leave me go and I screamed a lot of times  scaredy , don’t leave me! , and he had gone..

After that  I started to date with paddy, I saw scaredy watching us but he didn’t’ say or do that and made me think , he didn’t love me as I thought, I was so sad, sometime ago,  paddy purpose me marriage and I accepted cause I thought will help me to forget scaredy , the curious thing is sally called me to say she’ll have her wedding the same day as  the mine .

Wow…so my fa…I mean, scaredy married sally and you married paddy..-said scarlet

Yeah…but now I’m fine, I mean that’s what would happen, maybe we weren’t meant to be together..-said sue looking down and a serious.

But  I don’t get it..did you never ask him how did he feel ?,  I mean after that, did you never call him back or something??.-ask scarlet worry

Oh scarlet, it’s just I had tried but…after that, sally took the chance and finally convinced him to marry her , I that made me thing he didn’t love me as I thought, sometimes you are just wasting your time with someone who doesn’t love you as you thought and just break your heart.-said sue

And…what?!, are you happy right now?!, that’s what you wanted?!.-ask scarlet

I’ m fine, you are just a little girl !!, you don’t understand this kind of things, you don’t have any idea!.-said sue

But…-said scarlet

You better leave right now!!.-said sue angry

Fine…I’ll leave, and I’ll fix this!!.-said scarlet leaving

*scarlet goes to the store of the weird stuff*

Can I help you…?-ask the raccoon girl

Yes, I guess there’s been a huge mistake, this coin suppose to make scaredy won’t be my father anymore , not ruin the life of my parents and make I don’t exist.-said scarlet angry

That’s what I wanted to tell you little girl…but why you didn’t want to listen to me..-said the voice of the raccoon guy
What?!!..who is it?!.-replies scarlet looking around

It’s me…-said the raccoon
It’s you!, you did it  that to me!!.-said scarlet angry

No , no , no, I didn’t that to you ! , you did it to yourself !.-replies

What?!! , I didn’t want this for me , I just wanted scaredy weren’t my father anymore, not to destroy my parents life.-replies scarlet

Exactly, you wished he weren’t your father right, that’s what you got, he never were your father , then your mother never married him and she married another person instead , in result , you never born…!. , you need to know the logic of your wishes results, that’s how the magic works. , that’s what I was trying to tell you.-said the raccoon.

Well, then fix it!!.-said scarlet

Sorry, but I can do it..-said the raccoon
Why?!! , it’s your coin , you know who it works, you must know the way to fix it!.-said scarlet

Yeah, but only you could fix it ,  I forgot to tell you this magic coin only gots one wish, so  you used , you have no more wishes.-said the raccoon

What?! , well, then give me another magic stuff, lamp or something to wish recover my life!! .-said scarlet

I don’t have more magic stuffs like that, that was the last one, so this is gonna be your life till the end of the day.-said the raccoon

What?!! , what do you mean till the end of the day?!!.-ask scarlet

It’s just how you wished your parents never got married, you didn’t born , and you wished this exactly at middle night of yesterday, so at the middle night of the day , you’ll disappear FOR EVER!!.-said the raccoon

WHAT?!! , BUT…THAT COULDN’T BE HAPPENING…I NEVER WON’T THIS HAPPEN…I JUST…BUT…-said scarlet in shock sitting on the floor frightened .


Sorry, you should think better what you wish…, well its time to continue working…said the raccoon.

Dad….-said the raccoon girl looking scarlet

What?..ask the raccoon guy , then he see scarlet crying on the floor.

*sight*-Ok, ok , I guess you learned your lesson , I guess I got something that could help you to fix your mistake, so stop crying like a little girl, cause crying you won’t fix it  and mommy it’s not here anymore, and the floor gets wet.-said the raccoon guy.

Scarlet cleans her eyes and waits to see what he gots , he finally arrives with a clock.

Its just a clock.-said scarlet

It’s not just a clock, this clock could give you the chance to fix your mistake, but it’s have enough energy to works one time ok, this can give you the chance to back to the past and avoid this happen, okay?.-said the raccoon

Yeah, but how much time ?.-asks scarlet

Let ‘s see , yeah can take you at the day of the dance , I guess then you could change something.-said the raccoon

The dance…wait!!, sue said all that happened at the dance, so if I go back in the time and avoid that mistake my parents will marry and I’ll exist!!.-said scarlet

Well..technically yes, but you only got one chance okay, if you didn’t get it before the end of the day, you won’t exist!!.-said the raccoon.

Ok, I got it!! , and thanks so much!!.-said scarlet before use the clock and she press the button to travel to the past.
Scarlet finally backs to the past and see all it’s different than the present, she looks for scaredy at his house and job but his not there, so she finally looks in the gym , he’s wearing his sport suit and training with his paddleball with dave.  Scarlet decides to get close and talks to scaredy , but dave accidentally throws his paddle ball and scarlet catch it and do some moves, scaredy and dave saw it.

Wow! , I’ve never seen a girl playing like that.-said scaredy impressed

Oh..it’s nothing…it’s just you…I mean my father taught me , and his really good at paddle ball.-said scarlet

Wow! , he must be really good.-said scaredy

Yeah..he is..-said scarlet a little sad

Oh , I need to talk to you about something..could you give me just a seconds please?.-ask scarlet

Sure..but..if you can beat me at a paddle ball play!.-said scaredy challenging scarlet to play

What?...you are challenging me?..-ask scarlet surprised

Sure  , by the way you moved few seconds  ago, I bet you are good enough playing .

Ok, let’s do it!!.-said scarlet.

*view of both players getting ready to play, dave was the referee *

I just warm you I’m the best player of here, but don’t think I’ll be nice with you cause you are girl , but I’ll try to be not so rude with you.-said scaredy

Ok, I’ll hope it , cause I’ll do the same with you!.-said scarlet

Ready….GOOO!!.-Screams dave
Both players started to play, at the beginning,  scaredy has  a lot of confidence on his skills , scarlet do her best, both was drawn , scaredy was surprised seeing scarlet skills at paddle ball, but at the end something made him felt and scarlet won.

And Scarlet is the Winner!!!.-shouts Dave

Scarlet get close to scaredy and helps him to get up.

Are you okay?.-ask scarlet giving him her hand

Oh, yeah! , im fine, thanks.-replies scaredy holding scarlet hand

Wow! , it’s the first time I lose …-said scaredy surprised

Yeah…I can’t believe it, cause you are so good.-replies scarlet

Well, nice game  .-said scaredy with a little smile
Oh, thanks .-replies scarlet smiling too.

*finally scaredy gets up and both hold hands for a while then react and separate.*

Oh! , I’m sorry.-said scaredy
Oh, no, no problem *giggles*.-replies scarlet.

Oh!  , I need to talk to you.-said scarlet.

*view of scaredy and scarlet sitting on the terraces*

*take a breath*-well  , scaredy…I just need to know something….how’s your relationship with sue?!.-asks scarlet

What?! –said scaredy surprised

It’s just I heard you met her at a bus , and later both started to date , and later you didn’t see her after the play  , but you met again after a time and you have been good friends!.-said scarlet

Oh, well…actually we never date , we just acted together in a play and  we just split for a time and…later I met her again and we just….i’m not sure how to say it….-said scaredy


But you felt something for her right?! .-ask scarlet worried

Well….yes…-said scaredy

Exactly! , I mean you really liked her when you met her at the bus, right?!.-ask scarlet again getting close to him, looking him face to face and pushing him.

Yes…..-said scaredy a little frightened

Then , if you liked her at the bus as I thought, even with long time without see her , if two persons like each other enough , then , they could be togheter again??!!, right?!!!.-ask scarlet really close to him and pushing him down with her face.

Well…it’s just…it’s just..!!!, Dave , help me !!.-said scaredy to Dave

Why? , this I getting better.-said dave

Finally both separate and scaredy take a breath and answer.

*take a breath*, listen, me and sue just met at the bus, I admit I really liked her, later we acted together in a play but she gots crazy when she got’s the lead, and later I thought I was wrong. After the play I didn’t see her for a long time, but when I finally met her again, I think…I just remembered how did I feel when I meet her…cause she’s fine now. But by the moment…we are just friends.-said scaredy

That’s mean there’s another person?!! , who is it?!! , ah!! , please don’t tell me you are dating sally!!!.-said scarlet worry

WHAT?!! , NO! , We are not dating!! , she’s just my friend too! , why are you asking about it?!.-ask scaredy

Oh, well..!...for nothing.  Just…curiously, you know..i just wanted to know if you are dating with someone *giggles*-said scarlet

Well, by the moment I don’t have a relationship, I’m just focus in my job, the paddleball, keep things in order and clean , by the moment I’m fine.-said scaredy

Oh, that’s good!! …pretty good…oh well, look the hour, I gotta go, nice meeting you guys, bye!!!.-said scarlet leaving the gym

That was weird…who’s she?.-ask scaredy

I don’t know, but she really looks interested in your personal’s relationships.-replies dave
Yeah…but by other side…I never met someone who can plays like her and she…… defeated me…..she’s awesome *sight*.-said scaredy

What did you say?.-asks dave

Nothing!.-replies scaredy
sorry if this took to long , you've might been waiting for this , actually this part was already finished and part 4 too, it's just a guess i lost inspiration . backing to the history, now scarlet learns something called "be careful what you wish" , she finally takes her wish , if scaredy never was her father...what happened to him? , what about sue?, if she changed the history, that doesnt mean she won't exist?. find out on the next part of this fanfic.

Scaredy squirel by melanie watt and nelvana
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